4.07.2013

Lasso Tomorrow {An Abstraction on the Moon & Concrete Words Link-Up }


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I watch her, so full in glow right over the tree line.
Sometimes she is just a haunting sliver,
sometimes round in her beautiful girth,
sometimes heralded with a smattering of twinkling stars--
but she always startles me with her lonely gaze, how she stands proud
and straight, how she claims the night-sky hers,
dares anyone to come close.
She takes up her space up there
I put thumb and index finger right over her,
she's so small
I open and close and I can just see her,
so tiny, fitting in the inch between my pinched fingers
And yet she glows so bright she lights up the whole world.
I am in awe at her Creator
Sometimes she looms above me as I run round the lake
and I beg her for more time as she lowers upon my head
and rippling, still black water
Sometimes she slinks shy behind the trees,
or she proudly shines high in the sky
And sometimes it's like that with me--
my head is downcast and I have to look up
to find the light.
I look up and see her, just behind talls trees,
their bare-naked, skinny arms reaching up high toward her,
pointing The Way for me toward Something Bigger
The white beautiful pregnant full orb of her shines like a beacon
in the night and she whispers
Hush, child, slow down, she says to me.
Take in all the beauty around you, let it seize you, grip you, leave you 
flushed in it's tightened embrace
I hear her, Hush....
I see the way through the darkness, because she promises to
always shine on for me, to never go out,
she is my way home, and her constant never-changing
sings the praises of The One who is always the same
and does not change,
a lighthouse signaling to all ships chartering their course
in the night on open sea,
to all ships who've lost their way
in black velvet waters specked here and there with stars.
I will never be lost and I will always be home--
this I'm promised.
I watch her, her bosom so full as if she might nurse the whole world,
and I wonder could I ride the moon,
could I lasso her and tame her, break her, ride her into the next world?
I place my thumb up in front of my face, block her out, wiggle my thumb,
she's there, then she's gone.
What would it be like to walk on her? Would it be possible
to bring her down here, to me?
How does she stay up there night after night?
Does she ever fall from the sky, forget to shine, forget to point the way
for those who need it, for us wanderers?--
No, she stays night after night, millenniums old,
hung with the tippy tip of God's little finger.
And I feel old too, like her, the shining coming from within,
nothing I have but with what I've been given
I feel her reflection now, her quietness, her hush.
I know and understand now what she means.
There is a time to work and to rest.
Rest, child now, rest. 
Lasso tomorrow.





Gratitude: {#1067-1075}.... Continuing to give thanks, even when the heart doesn't feel it...

For a husband who listens, even if he has to work at it--working at it is love...
for children's laughter that sounds like worship, my joy in them making the moment complete
Hands in God's dirt
Sunshine on our faces
Red Cardinals and blue jays swooping through the yard
That I can call my Mama when I'm in trouble, when I need someone to calm me down...
For children who make my life complete and full, busy, giving me purpose...
For friends who love unconditionally
For birthdays and haircuts and airplane tickets (!!) --a line borrowed from my friend, Kelli




Friends, I appreciate you helping me get the word out about Concrete Words! Be sure to use the hashtag #concretewords. Please use the "Share" feature at the bottom of this post--thanks!  

What this link-up is about: In the lovely Amber Haines' words, we "write out spirit" by practicing writing about the invisible using concrete words. In case you are going "what in the world is a concrete word?!"--this just means (using the prompt to inspire) write out a story, a memory, a feeling, a belief, and make me feel what you felt, describe the scene around you, the textures, the emotions, the tastes, smells, the light. Tell me what you touch, see, hear--this is concrete words. It's a way to describe the invisible things that are around us, (that we may take for granted) in every day life. The prompt is not the concrete word--the concrete words are what you use to place us there in your story.  

A few simple guidelines:  1. Be sure you link up the URL to your Concrete Words
                                             post and not just your blog home page URL.
                                         2. Put a link to this post on your blog so that others 
                                             can find their way back here.
                                         3. Try to visit one or two others and encourage their efforts
                                         4. Please write along with us, using concrete words--
                                             Please no entries with how-to's, advertising, or 
                                             sponsored posts 
                                         5. Consider sharing via social media to help get word out!
**Today's prompt is the Moon


Next week, our Concrete Words prompt is Worship. {This week I'm starting something new--I'll highlight a beautiful post on Friday (and announce it on social media), so come back here to see whose post is highlighted and encourage them!

**Because of what I shared * here,I cannot always answer comments and visit very many blogs, but I will do my best to visit those who link up here! I would love for you to feel a sense of community when you are here, and I hope you do feel right at home--I just think--though we all search for so much interaction and approval from others, that sometimes, maybe in some seasons, sometimes very long seasons, just a quiet place is what we truly need. Just a place to reflect, pray, dream. 

I cherish your words, and the beautiful soul God made you. I am nodding my head, teary-eyed, as I read your hearts here. I'd like you to know that when I see you here, my heart just leaps out of my chest to connect with you--to let you know I hear you! And while you leave such sweet words here, I am probably somewhere cleaning a precious 3-year-old baby girls' messes, listening to an eleven year old playwrite's brave words, or teaching my crew. If you are here, know you are loved, and you're the seasonin' in my soup. 

{This post shared with Ann, Jen, Laura, HeatherEmily, and Jennifer for #TellHisStory}

Let's have some fun with concrete words! (You can join in anytime this week until the linky is closed!) **When linking, please check out the one-word prompt first! Thanks!** 

13 comments:

  1. This is just beautiful. Wonderfully atmospheric and powerful.
    Thank you.

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  2. Dear Nacole
    I just love your analogy of the moon being so bosomy as to nurse the whole word. I think in a spiritual sense, she does feed us on the rays of the Son!
    Blessings to you
    Mia

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  3. Dear Nacole,
    Your words and imagery are beautiful...Sorry I haven't been able to link up yet...one of these days, and thanks for the invite, my friend :)

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  4. Wow, stunning writing. I loved this :)

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  5. Beautiful words Nacole. I could see you dancing around the water under the glow of moonlight, taking it all in and smiling.

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  6. Oh, just lovely, Nacole. I can't remember the scripture but somewhere the Bible refers to the moon as the "faithful witness in the sky". I think of this every Maundy Thursday, imagining that same full round figure that I now see is the same face that looked down upon Christ in the garden. it is awe-inspiring, isn't it?

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  7. Nacole, beautiful. This is poetry. I love the way I hear a child-like awe and how it is as if I am right there under these glorious glowing orb. Your words, your art, a gift.

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  8. Oh. The imagery here, it is pure glory and childlike wonder. I have loved the moon, appreciated her beauty, in a special way this season I've been in, and so this speaks so deep to my heart. Thank you.

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  9. Cardinals in my yard are one of my very favorite things - and, oh, how blessed you are to have a mama like that - I've never known that kind of support except from my husband:) Nacole, your poem is beautiful, seeing God in the moon - I love that moonlight is the sun's reflection - and you show me how it changes our countenance:) Wishing you blessings this week!

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  10. Nacole, your writing is stunning. Such a talent

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  11. I love this Nacole. It reminds me of the Christmas movie, It's a wonderful life, where he offers to lasso the moon for her...

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  12. Lovely, Nacole. One day, not too long ago, I got up to take my young man to school, and the moon was still visible in the sky even though it was daylight. It seemed so strange. I rememberd, reading this.

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